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The Eyeless GirlThere once a little girl. She had brilliant red hair and gracing green eyes. Everyone in her village loved her and her parents. Her parents were lords of their own estate and didn't do much harm to anyone. One day their house oddly burned down and only the girl survived. The entire village thought of her as a witch for surviving and accused her of killing her own parents. She was expelled from her town and went to somehow live on her own. Stricken with grief the girl gouged out her brilliant green eyes and soon her fine red hair became a mop of tangled ungodly monstrosity. Hoping to find her way back to the village only to be called a monster and had her face burned beyond recognition. She hobbled for days, having her legs crippled when she came upon a field of grass. There on the other side was a boy with light hair. He was lazing the day away as always when he found that poor girl crawling across the meadow. He went to her and tried to calm her down. She realizing that

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Ellie Bellby ~Tokosha

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my oc ellie, ye
she looks sweet but she's crazy xD

Critique by ~quiblanc Jan 4, 2013, 4:36:00 PM

This is so cute!! I love the shadowing, the face, the cherry

and the boots are so cute!! You need not to edit this in any way. I know this is kind of off topic, but if you have any points, would you like to donate to my donation poll or adopt one of my jello characters?? Thank you!!

It has a 100-word minimum, so I shall waste the rest of the words
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There we go!! bibi

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~SuperFanLoveraxl Jan 10, 2013

You have awesome Ocs Mother..............QAQ X'D

~Tokosha Jan 10, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

xD thanks!

~SuperFanLoveraxl Jan 10, 2013

Your welcome~!^^

=TsukiHina Jan 9, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Well, you requested my help on this, and I shall try ><
I do adore what you did here, your drawing is looking a lot better then when we first met, it shows you are really trying to get better!
I am proud of you for that.

Here are some things I'd like to point out though..

First thing that caught my eye. Her lower legs look kind of broken here. The leg shouldn't bend backward where the top of the boots are, if you want the bent foot look, it should be bent at the ankles still. I could draw you a rough sketch or tutorial for this :3

Her hands, well, hands are tough to draw anyway xD
But my issue here is that her hand seems to be posed sidways but her fingers are all still showing?
Most of her fingers should be hidden behind the first one or two in this pose. Also the thumb is a little thick. (I'll draw a sketch for this as well if you'd like xD )

The last thing I'd love to see you work on, is the back shape.
It seems you drew the back awfully straight here, when if you look at a normal female, they have quite the curve in their back.

Actually you know what, I'm gonna draw a sheet of a full body to show you all this stuff. Its really hard for me to explain, like I said I'm bad at this ;n;
But I wanna help you learn anatomy so I'll go ahead and set this up right now!

~Tokosha Jan 9, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Haha! Thanks soooooo much! My people tend to be noodles

Omg REALLY!?! That will help me sooo much! Thanks so much for helping me! Q7Q thanks for pointing it out :'3
How about after i take a look at the tut i draw a base person, no clothes just atonamy and shiz! 8D than you can judge me better there!

=TsukiHina Jan 9, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Okay, I can do that for you.
I'll draw a pose like this to show you some helpful hints on how to draw the body properly

I really liked how you colored the hair on this pic btw, the way you made it so each strand was showing~ It looked really nice.
Your coloring has gotten better overall. It's just the anatomy that caught me off guard, and I can help a bit with that~

And sure, if you draw a base body, it'd help me look over what I can help you with ^ ^

~Tokosha Jan 10, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Ok! If i get the chance to today or this weekend i will! Thanks so much! I appreicate the help! OMERGERD as a way of thanking you after i get better at not making noodles ill draw your oc Tsuki for you! O7O/

=Kimyono-Neko Jan 5, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

her appearence tell she looks nice but....I like this anyway~! :S

~Tokosha Jan 5, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

But what?

=Kimyono-Neko Jan 5, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

At first I saw this ellie and I was like "hmmm she seems very nice and sweet girl" but when you mentioned that she's crazy I was like "What?! O__O"

But I still like her anyway! XD

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